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It was a dim, quiet night
when we sat side by side
As whispers of your love
ebbed and flowed like the tide
Of a strong dark ocean
shifting beneath a silent moon
We watched all the stars.
Against the dark skies they were strewn
Like the feelings I had for you,
but I held my tongue tight
Was I very wrong?
Or was this feeling right?
You still held my hand close,
sending currents through my skin
A stifling silence followed,
my heart throbbed. I felt thin
Veiled in nothing but my doubts,
though to you it all seems clear.
I knew I loved you too,
but there was that nagging fear.
I've never loved anyone before,
the way I love you now,
Perhaps it's not love I feel,
but how can tell? Just how?!
And what if you were wrong
and your love turned out a lie?
What if you left me alone,
broke me, made me cry?
I've never been able to understand
what they call love.
What defines it, why is it felt,
how do I know it's love?
And does it sting with the power of fire,
or does it give numb pain?
Is it true, can I trust it to be,
or is it all in vain?
Will my heart be shattered to bits?
Will I lose it all?
Can I soar above the clouds,
or will it make me fall
Into deep depression as I've seen girls
after love has failed?
Will I rise to its challenge,
or will it make me quail?
You slant your face and move in close,
your lips apart. I moved
away in shock and agonized fear,
but the feeling is renewed.
Though you move back to afford me time,
I know my heart's decision.
Your lips still parted, as mine do,
I lean in with determined precision
In a single second, the world has cleared,
a shock jolts me back
The veil is gone and the doubts are cleared,
for my mind is no longer blank.
I don't care what this is, it's too inexplicable for words,
it's something only we feel,
It's like flying, it's like tumbling, electric and effervescent.
All I know is that this thing is real.
It was a dim quiet night, when you kissed me goodnight
And all my doubts scattered to birth joy
The bugs buzzed around us, there was dew in the air
All I cared for was that feeling unalloyed
when we sat side by side
As whispers of your love
ebbed and flowed like the tide
Of a strong dark ocean
shifting beneath a silent moon
We watched all the stars.
Against the dark skies they were strewn
Like the feelings I had for you,
but I held my tongue tight
Was I very wrong?
Or was this feeling right?
You still held my hand close,
sending currents through my skin
A stifling silence followed,
my heart throbbed. I felt thin
Veiled in nothing but my doubts,
though to you it all seems clear.
I knew I loved you too,
but there was that nagging fear.
I've never loved anyone before,
the way I love you now,
Perhaps it's not love I feel,
but how can tell? Just how?!
And what if you were wrong
and your love turned out a lie?
What if you left me alone,
broke me, made me cry?
I've never been able to understand
what they call love.
What defines it, why is it felt,
how do I know it's love?
And does it sting with the power of fire,
or does it give numb pain?
Is it true, can I trust it to be,
or is it all in vain?
Will my heart be shattered to bits?
Will I lose it all?
Can I soar above the clouds,
or will it make me fall
Into deep depression as I've seen girls
after love has failed?
Will I rise to its challenge,
or will it make me quail?
You slant your face and move in close,
your lips apart. I moved
away in shock and agonized fear,
but the feeling is renewed.
Though you move back to afford me time,
I know my heart's decision.
Your lips still parted, as mine do,
I lean in with determined precision
In a single second, the world has cleared,
a shock jolts me back
The veil is gone and the doubts are cleared,
for my mind is no longer blank.
I don't care what this is, it's too inexplicable for words,
it's something only we feel,
It's like flying, it's like tumbling, electric and effervescent.
All I know is that this thing is real.
It was a dim quiet night, when you kissed me goodnight
And all my doubts scattered to birth joy
The bugs buzzed around us, there was dew in the air
All I cared for was that feeling unalloyed
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Halleluja! I've written romantic poetry!
For those who know me, this is a real deviation from my nature.
I'm a very unromantic person, I don't believe in love and i've tried to examine it with logic. I understand the science of it but it never works with logic, i couldn't explain it, so i threw it out the window.
I don't read romance novels, and i can't stand books that are purely love stories.
So as a challenge, i decided to write a love story in the form of a poem, from the eyes of a young girl who's found her first love.
this is really something for me, since i never figured i'd manage anything with teen love in it
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